Harriet Pemberton

Dec 30

How to Write a Winning Scholarship Essay

Scholarships can make the difference between attending your dream school and settling for a backup. Here's how to write essays that win funding.


Understand What Scholarship Committees Want:

They're investing in your future. They want to see:

  • Clear goals and ambition
  • Evidence of achievement and potential
  • Financial need (if applicable)
  • Alignment with the scholarship's mission

The Winning Formula:


  1. Open with Impact — Start with a specific moment or achievement that demonstrates your drive.

  2. Tell Your Story — Connect your background, challenges, and achievements into a coherent narrative. Be specific about obstacles you've overcome.

  3. Show Impact — Quantify your achievements when possible. "Raised $5,000 for local food bank" is stronger than "helped my community."

  4. Connect to the Scholarship — Research the organization's values and mission. Show how you embody them.

  5. Look Forward — Articulate clear goals and explain how this scholarship will help you achieve them.

Pro Tips:

  • Apply to many scholarships — it's a numbers game
  • Tailor each essay to the specific scholarship
  • Have someone proofread every submission
  • Keep a master document of your achievements and experiences for quick reference
  • Start early — many deadlines are months before college deadlines

I've helped students collectively win over $2 million in scholarships. The common thread? They all told authentic, specific stories.

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